Thursday, April 24, 2014

That second

Water kisses the brim of glass,
Fire ablaze red hot,
Water flows close to the danger mark,
That second stakes the charm.

One more step with wounded feet,
One sip of water to beat the heat,
Last try to achieve the dream,
That second stakes the belief.

Anger waiting patiently to explode,
Life ready to break its chore,
Relations prepared to diffuse the self,
That second stakes one’s will 

copyright aditi kochhar

2 comments:

  1. Hey,
    This one is very nice...
    You seem to be back in form..
    I believe you can extend it a bit more.
    Just try once.
    Anyway it is a good way you presented "That second"
    Good idea.
    Keep writing.

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    1. Thanks Sushanto. I'm glad you liked the idea. Well, expand, OK, I may give it a try..
      Thanks again. Happy reading.

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