Monday, August 16, 2010

Realms of flashback

Divine silence,
Deep words of exchange,
Presence pours out peace,
Together, soul feels at ease…..

Realms of flashback,
Knock the doors of poignant memories.

Heavenly becomes the earthly existence,
Far away from any apprehension,
The mystical aura bounds strength,
Annihilation of self is the end.

Realms of flashback,
Knock the doors of poignant memories.

Wait, stay a while,
Pass this trial of nature’s planned journey,
Where truer are the realms of flashback,
That knocks the doors of poignant memories……

copyright aditi kochhar
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8 comments:

  1. AkhileshAugust 19, 2010 at 10:04 AM

    Hey great one, i liked it.
    really was able to feel it.
    So you are back on track :)
    hehehe:)

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  2. Samaksh KapoorAugust 24, 2010 at 9:23 PM

    Real work on this one...FABULOUS aditi..!! :)

    Sam

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  3. UnknownAugust 31, 2010 at 8:42 PM

    hi aditi!
    Your work is really nice
    Much better than i could ever write.
    read this one only so far
    it was really cool..
    looking forward to read the other ones as well..

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  4. UnknownSeptember 1, 2010 at 11:36 AM

    u can check my blog at
    http://expressions1807.blogspot.com
    i have just started blogging
    do give suggestions so that i can improve

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  5. /\ d iSeptember 2, 2010 at 1:41 PM

    Thanks sushanto !!! I'm glad that you liked my blog.
    suggestion to improve, well then 1st one would be -
    Never think I or any third person write much better than you could ever write...
    One writes as he/she wants to unfurl his/her thoughts... And frame of words, when writen with true emotions are never comparable. Each penned line is as beautiful as ever!!!
    And I saw your blog, its really nice.. I liked it.
    Regards, Aditi

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  6. UnknownSeptember 2, 2010 at 8:50 PM

    Hi aditi...
    really nice suggestion. Thanks..
    And i am glad that your read my blog and liked it..
    Can contact at snowhite1807@gmail.com..
    tc..

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  7. UnknownSeptember 4, 2010 at 1:08 PM

    hi thanks a lot for the comments on my poem.
    glad that you liked it..

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  8. UnknownSeptember 17, 2010 at 12:53 AM

    hey thanks again...
    just read your comments....

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